Jide Alakija

09 Sep 2007 1,818 views
 
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I'm not sure I'm too happy with this one. I think there are too many textures and distractions in the shot. I find that the shirt stripes and the floor texture clash. Also I'm not sure I like the toning. Anyway now I've told you why I don't like it, what I do like is the way the little girl is looking at Deji. What do you think?

On another note. I was invited to a poetry evening at the Poetry Cafe in Covent Garden (for those of you into that sort of thing I strongly suggest you check it out) and on discussion with some poets I found that the problem I have with titling my images is very common amongst many artists. For that reason I'm not going to be titling my work unless I feel led to. I'll just number them. If you can think of an appropriate title for this one please send it in as a suggestion.

NY tommorrow!

comments (12)

  • Josef
  • Sweden
  • 9 Sep 2007, 08:38
Nice shot, I actually like the way it's composed.
this definitely aint my week on shutterchance sad
a priceless shot Jide and my fav of the day!
(how do u see these things?????)
and wetin u kon mean now Yinka???? take am easy oh!
  • kaj
  • switzerland
  • 9 Sep 2007, 10:31
i really like this picture.
  • Yẹni
  • London U.K
  • 9 Sep 2007, 13:53
priceless
  • Yẹni
  • London U.K
  • 9 Sep 2007, 13:54
whose taking the shot
  • PhotoSam
  • United Kingdom
  • 9 Sep 2007, 14:47
lol, such a great street capture...i dont think you should be so self-critical, my attention was immediately drawn to the girl and the man....the footpath came in far later...
I absolutely adore this shot, truly a keeper for the wedding album :d
  • Steve
  • United Kingdom
  • 9 Sep 2007, 17:59
Fantastic bit of observation here Jide. I'm so glad that Deji has his shirt tucked in wink maybe you could get him to wear a plain one next time!

Your title is fine.
  • bisola
  • United Kingdom
  • 9 Sep 2007, 20:31
excellent shot! We may just be able to 'slide' this photo into the album afterall smile Deji, lap it up... it's your week!
@Yinks
@Bisola
:p:p:p:p
It is a funny shot and I would love to see it hanging in a gallery. No, my personal cup of tea but it is something that I can see growing on me with time.

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